Hey, well, this is my first actual C&C post to this list, so lets see
how it goes, hmm? ^_^
Well, first things first. I really love this. Both the Fanfic and the
Anime. EVA is such a deep series, and has lots of underlying conflicts
with the characters. For fanfic authors, I think, there is a lot of room
here for self-retrospectives, but then again, due to how the series
ends, there really isn't much left to be said by fanfic authors. Its a
tough call. But, I happen to think that this fic really keeps with the
characters and does a good job of advancing the story, without betraying
the original. Its very, very enjoyable for me to read, and I think
others will tend to agree. :)
The scene with Asuka and Shinji is really nicely written. I would keep
that all the same. I like the way you've taken a look at what Asuka is
thinking, it works really nicely.
(I've been making Asuka a little too nice lately. Now be prepared for
Asuka the bitch.)
Hehee...YAY! Well, I LOVE Asuka; she's my fave character right now. She
is just too much like me its scary. I have a feeling I am gonna like the
next part of your story. Asuka being a bitch is just half the fun of
EVA. ^_^
Please please please keep on writing this, whatever you do. This fic is
coming along really nicely, and (as i've mentioned before) I can't wait
for the next installment. :)
Ahh, but one little gripe I have. Its almost too small to even be worth
saying, but oh well. 'dummkopt' should be spelled 'dummkopf'. See?
Wasn't that a really minute detail? I can't help but be pikky at least
once though. I guess it doesn't really matter. :)
Well, keep up the good work!
**Christina**
WOOHOO! I don't have a sig!! :(
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