---Anand Rao  wrote:

WOW. I've never turned out a story in 24hrs before.  I have a LOT
of respect for you '1hr' guys....  I just could not do that.
This story came from an idea from Carol Hull and my mind just 
took off with it.  Actually, although its pretty short, it was 
a lot longer than I had expected.  

Kasumi is my favorite female character in Ranma 1/2.  I just 
love her.  So this story was easy to write.  I am thinking
of following up with a 'Lemon'  nothing too graphic, just
building up the sexual tension between Ranma and Kasumi until
it explodes into something...  Oh, let's see....

C&C is appreciated please send to anandr@earthlink.net.

P.S.  anyone interested in being a pre-reader for a Loddoss Wars
story?  It's no where near complete, only about 40k so far...

Excellent short story!  Very, very poingnant and bright.  I would
suggest that you flesh it out and make a larger, more expanded tale,
athough I wouldn't recommend a lemon; I just can't see Kasumi in that
light.
BTW, I'll read your Lodoss fic.  Send away!
--Ashita
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