Hmmm.

	Well, the series started off pretty strong, and teh concept was 
good... but what happened to the whole 'week' idea?  I was under the 
impression it was a story that would span a week, each writer covering 
one of the days.  But the last two parts took place within the span of an 
hour or so...
	Unless each author was going to _post_ a chapter a day...

	One other thing: since when is it against Amazon Law to not use 'love' 
magic?  I know they don't use it as often as fanfics would have them, but Team 
China has resorted to it in the past, no?

	-Mike