Subject: White Darkness' C&C
From: "Jorge A. Pratt" <al709382@mordor.ccm.itesm.mx>
Date: 6/23/1997, 1:53 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


Well, thanks for all the constructive C&C ^_^ ! I wasn't very sure about
the story to begin with, since I just started writing and let it flow by
itself (for some reason, I work best when I have a good layout of the
entire plot, which is the case for LightBirds and Breaking all Limits.)

So, now I have two choices. First, to revise -both- endindgs, taking all
of your suggestions into account, or revise just -one- of them --the
second choice being selecting which ending to work on. Apparently, from
the responses I've gotten, the strongest ending is the "dark" one, as it
also has less holes than the "light" ending, so I will probably revise
that one first.

Again, thanks for your comments! ^_^ You'll also be hearing about my two
"major" projects very soon... <MML>


The Zephyr
al709382@campus.ccm.itesm.mx