Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] Purple-Haired Destiny 2
From: Ryan Anderson
Date: 5/5/1997, 3:31 PM
To: KLEPPE@execpc.com
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com


This story is by Ryan Anderson <andersor@nag.cs.colorado.edu>.

This was great!

thanks!!!! ;)


I for one really liked the way Nodoka was portrayed. Too often she's
used as a plot device, as someone for the author to talk through and
whip the characters into shape.

That's the way I've always felt too, and it was my hope with this story to
show her in a little less-than-flattering way.

I still think your story could be served
better by a more balanced portrayl of Akane, especially considering the
wonderful depth you've given to the other characters.

Yeah, I've been rather harsh on Akane, haven't I? I've gotten quite a
number of complaints about my treatment of her, so maybe I'll have to do
something about it <ideas begin quagulating in Ryan's brain... not that
this is nessisarily a good thing...> ;)



BTW, I agree with you that a Shampoo-Mousse relationship probably
wouldn't work. I know which character I think would be good for Mousse,
but I ain't saying who until I get a chance to use the idea myself. You
can't have it! It's mine! :-)

;) Can't wait to see it! Of course, can you guess who Mousse is going to
end up with in my fanfic? ;)

Ryan