Subject: comments [Ranma][SM][xover]Sailor Moon R1/2 |
From: "Richard E.Robinson" <rik@cfanet.com> |
Date: 5/4/1997, 4:55 AM |
Reply-to: rik@cfanet.com |
very good plotting; I liked the way Ranma's past was exposed. I thought there was enough plot ideas for a three or four part series at least and that's not counting the ending which could a whole story by itself. I saw a few minor misspellings but on the whole this was an interesting but to compacted story almost an outline IMHO but enjoyed very much and look forward to more from this author whether other stories or revisings of this one. Richard Robinson (just call me Rick or Rik) Rik@cfanet.com