Subject: comments [Ranma][SM][xover]Sailor Moon R1/2
From: "Richard E.Robinson" <rik@cfanet.com>
Date: 5/4/1997, 4:55 AM
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rik@cfanet.com

 very good plotting; I liked the way Ranma's past was 
exposed. I thought there was enough plot ideas for a three 
or four part series at least and that's not counting the 
ending which could a whole story by itself.
 I saw a few minor misspellings but on the whole this was 
an interesting but to compacted story almost an outline 
IMHO but enjoyed very much and look forward to more from 
this author whether other stories or revisings of this one.
Richard Robinson

(just call me Rick or Rik)
Rik@cfanet.com