Subject: Re: Facing Up
From: WebDragon
Date: 1/30/1997, 1:04 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

        Very nice.  You got into Ryoga's head and exposed his feelings
and thoughts in a very realistic manner - the part where Akane
thought he just had a 'crush' on her was excellent.  She doesn't know
she is hurting him more with her words, and Ryoga knows she doesn't
want to hurt him, but neither of them could help the situation.

        Tragic.  Self-examining.  Well told, barring a few minor spelling
errors. 

        You should have named the story "Moving On", IMO.  ^_^