On Sun, 1 Dec 1996, James V. Nutley wrote:

As for myself, I've followed Ami to Isolde/Naru's side, so I'm still ignorant of the
Norse motif's.

Most of that is in part 3
 

If I have to react RIGHT NOW, then I'd have to say this story is interesting and
fun, but I miss the stronger romance elements. I was a sucker for "First Knight"

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Evil movie!

and wish we could catch people in their clinches from their own point of view.
By running around inside Ami's head, we can only catch echoes and stolen 
embraces of the passions raging around us.  

True.  There's a bit more of that in part III, though :)

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu      bailesu@komodo.hacks.arizona.edu  
http://www.hacks.arizona.edu/~bailesu/falcon.html 

     P-chan ran across the field and hopped into Akane's arms.  She
snuggled her little pet.  "I love you, P-chan, especially with a little
apple in your mouth and that special sauce Ukyou makes."  They cooked
P-chan over an open fire and made special okonomiyaki out of him.  And
all was good.

--Draft of Lemon Sherbet, Episode 12