On Sat, 30 Nov 1996, Peter Schell wrote:

At 05:39 PM 11/23/96 -0500, you wrote:

This is only a small part of a fanfic in progress.  If you can, please
give C&C direct back to author, and I'll go where I can on this.  Thanks. 


Jason Ballew



			   AN ERROR OF COMEDIES
							
	   		  A Ranma 1/2 Fanfiction
						  
		All Ranma Character Copyright Rumiko Takahashi	
				
        	  Original Character Copyright Jason Ballew
  				  
  				  
  				  
Scene:  Ucchan's
Time:  Late Evening

	The youth nodded, and responded, as if a rote phrase.  "Furinkan
koko wa doka da?" 

A now I remember. You wrote what you did quite well but I really didn't

know where you were going. Is this a son of Kuno's father, a Kuno relative.
Or just some one sent to japan to beg him to return to his rightfull place
as the god of an obscure Hawain tribe.

I allways enjoy giving feedback on new ideas but there is not much here to
get my mind on.

Give us a little idea of what you have in mind and I'll be happy to suggest
all sorts of useless plots and story ideas

Actually, none of the above.  For the longest time I was sick to death of 
what I'm told are the 'insertion' fanfics.  I mean, with very few 
exceptions, they're not worth the words it takes to type. :)

So, I thought....what if a character of my own design were thrown into 
Ranma, but a little more _realistically_?  What if he didn't really know 
Japanese, wasn't a fighter, et al....he was just...thrown among the 
loopiness of Nerima?  

Thus, came the idea of An Error of Comedies.

More will come tomorrow.  I'll do a quick character outline of my character.

However, I've already come up with that he'll end up involved with 
_someone_ in Nerima.  It won't be Akane.  I don't know _who_ it'll be.  
IF anyone has suggestions there, and you can throw fanfic chars at me if 
you want, and I'll give credit where due..... *grin*

J. Ballew