Well, I kind of liked it myself. 

Anyways, I would like to see more side comments as the twelve days go by.
 You know, string along the violent tomboy part, and have her do more things
to Ranma.  Also, for the Ukyou fanboys out there (you know who you are ^_^)
you might want to include her somehow.  Or have Nabiki order take-out for the
poisonins part (for a modest fee, of course. ^_-)

Keep up the good work.

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
          ---I have to talk to my friend Ryan about getting copies of a
couple of Miyazaki movies to give to a cousin of mine for Chrismas.