Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic](R1/2)Escape 5
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 11/27/1996, 8:51 AM
To: Fanfiction ML

 On Mon, 25 Nov 1996 07:51:25 -0600 (CST) Matthew Trotter wrote:

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: Escape From Nerimia
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: Part five: Day One
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:    "First we take of all our cloths.

"clothes" I think.

:    Akane reached out a trembling hand to stop Ranma from pulling away, 
: "Ranma I ... I want . .I want you to kiss me..."
:    Ranma's eyes got wider, "Akane...a..are .. ar. are you ...s.s.sure?"
:    Akane leaned closer, she could feel Ranma's rapid breath on her cheek, 
: "Y.yyes.."
:    <WHAM WHAM WHAM>
: 
:    "Hey, are you done making out in there or what?"

She is doing that on purpose.  There is *no* way they could do
that *every* time without doing it on purpose.


Oh, and I think you exceeded the allowed amount of ellipsis dots
in a fanfic.  :)


Sebastian
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