O.K. where to begin, the bisexual part was a little unexpected but
definitly welcome, I like to be suprised. I still wonder why you
chose to make Ranko Princess and Akane Captain of the Guards. I
think that with Ranko's fighting ability she would make a better
Captain, but this is your story not mine. You're right about the
point of getting a little away from the Hyrule story, but you can
only stick so close (Ranma doesn't use a sword), maybe you should
pull some characters or weapons out of Hyrule or something. Other
than that it is coming along great and I can't wait to read the
rest of it. Trudge On!!!!
Sean "Trunks" O'Byrne
"It'll never work...never, never, never." The future sensei of the Anything
Goes Martial Arts