z5f02@ttacs1.ttu.edu wrote:

          BAKA NO HUNE PRESENTS:

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        A RANMA 1/2 FANFIC BY

             LOCHMEADOW

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     RANMA 1/2:  THE BLOOD OF EDEN

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Well, I have mixed feelings about this. It's my point of view, but
there's too much unanswered. And, judging from the ending, things ended
up exactly as they were, and we never found out exactly how Susan
"killed" Ranko. Otherwise, it was mysterious enough to appeal to me.

Wow, that was interesting...If you're
wondering where this came from, the
answer's simple.  NOBODY has written
anything about the `Tragic Story'.  It
was pretty much fair game open to any.

Excuse me, but I HAVE. Read "The Four Birds of Fire" (posted on Dec. 08,
1995) for the original story of the Drowned Twin Sisters, Zhaodi and
Pandi, and their relation to Nyannichuan and Shuanshontsuniichuan. TCP
(The Caller's Plight) (currently being posted) goes a little beyond, and
"Lightbirds" (first sections complete) gives full details about how they
drowned, the repercussions that their death had, and what heppened
inside the springs.

(Side note: Zhaodi is the "older" twin. Her soul entered Ranma's body.
After being split apart, she was named Ranko. Pandi is the "younger"
twin. Her soul entered the small monkey that Herb tossed into
Nyannichuan. When she overcame the monkey's mind, she took the name
Yuannyan and became Herb's fianc�e.)

Anyway I toyed around with the idea
that not only was the form transferred
to the cursed person, but the soul as
well...that's where Susan and Ranko
came in.

Sorry to break it to ya, but a there's a lot of US that have used that
plot device.

Several things were left unanswered in
the story intentionally.  They will be
taken care of later.

Hopefully ^_^

Anyway, thanks for reading this, tell
us...Baka No Hune that is...what you
think by leaving C&C on the ML, we'll
get it.  Have a good day, and enjoy
all that you have...you never know
when it might be taken away.

BAKA NO HUNE is:

                    Viper
                    Motenai
                    Momo-Kun
                    Dark Schneider
                    Lochmeadow
                    Ryoga Hibiki
                    Sailor Slacker
                    and
                    Argon

WOW. So many people working on a single fanfic?

The TerBril
(who hopes that the "tragic story" has been cleared up.)