Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][Ranma][Help] Help for Scoop of the Day Ch. 4
From: Travis Butler
Date: 9/5/1996, 2:58 AM
To: "Fan FictionML" <fanfic@fanfic.com>, <raphael@asu.edu>

From:        raphael@asu.edu

   Uh...before I start to write number four, I need to know a bit of 
information about Principal Kuno (actually, I should have checked before 
I started writing chapter three, but I guess I got impatient). 
   I don't know a thing about him, besides the fact that he's Tatewaki's 
dad and that he likes Hawaii. Any information would be appreciated so 
that I don't make a factual (well, as factual as manga ever gets) mistake 
in the next installment. Thanks in advance (and please C&C Chapter Three)!

Hmm. Well, *really quick* response (I think I can hear the sighs of 
relief from here! ^_^): 

I liked it a great deal. The introspective bits you added took care of 
just about all the problems I had with Noriko's character in part 2, and 
I thought worked quite well.

I'll do a more thorough C&C if you like; though I've been a bit busy 
lately. :)



Travis Butler
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