Hello from the Slashtooth Reviewing offices! This review I am posting
seperatly, as I promised the author a review, and I am a bit late in
posting it.
Lost Memories #1
The only question I have at this point is "How much exposure have you
had to the Ranma 1/2 Universe?" There was a severe lack of character
continuity, and a lot of them said or did things that just didn't fit.
As for the new additions, I must withold judgment on them, untill we
have seem more of them. Keep writing, but try to get more exposure to
the Ranmaverse as well. A better understanding of the characters can
only make the story better.
There you have it. My honest opinion of Lost Memories #1. Use it or
toss it, this is how I felt.
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