Mike Noakes wrote:
... at least things can't get any worse!
Just when you think they have learned, in comes someone who _Still_uses
that line...
(And, comforted by that final thought, she finally drifts off
to sleep.
*** To be continued... ***
AUTHOR'S BABBLE
Right. Hope you liked it! As always, please send C&C!
Ok, here it comes. Ready?
Overall: Good Fanfic. I have no rating scale, so that will have to do.
Grammer and spelling: Looked good, minor spelling mistakes, but nobody
is perfect.
Characters: Seemed to be in character, and getting a feel for the 'new'
Ranma.
Continuity: Good, but in every part, Ranma states he NEEDS to read that
diary, but never seems to get to it. I think it would be good if he
finally read it, and tried to keep the new information seperate from the
old. After all, he is still Ranma, and when did Ranma ever pass up info
that would help him in any situation?
Just my .37 cents worth (Inflation, taxes, and fees take their toll
everywhere)
- Mike Noakes
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