I dont know whats wrong, I got the first three parts perfectly 
legebly and I loved them.  however I cant read them in this form.  as 
to your request  for some c+c I would love to as soon as I can read 
them 

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	Chaz sat in Sylia's computer room silently studying the files she'd marked for him to read. After two weeks he gotten through about half of them. Thanks to his AI his reading speed and retention we
e phenomenal. The problem was the AI couldn't help him understand what the files were saying. He could have memorized all of them in one day if he'd wanted to. But the files interlocked in such a fa
hion that it was best to read them and integrate the knowledge rather than just scan them into memory.
	He sighed. Sometimes it seemed like such a waste. Sylia's research was brilliant. Her father's was well into the genius level. But because of one mistake in judgment, most of it was being wasted. W
at was being used was being perverted. Professor Stingray had done much more research into field effects then Chaz had even suspected. The Black Box had been a relatively early discovery. Much of th
 rest had been put off because the resources needed to test the theories weren't available. Maybe in a couple of more days he could finish his reading and actually start discussing the material with
Sylia. Yeah, right.
	A mental note came up from his AI. At some point he had to make a trip out to see Irene. Her nano-neural surgery, despite the doctors fears, had gone very well. She was up, and if not exactly runni
g yet at least on her way, with nothing to show that a portion of her spine was cybernetic. He smiled. That news had come just in time to coincide with his and Priss's first jam session. He'd made t
e mistake of telling her he played the guitar. Since then she'd been hounding him to regain his old skill and play with her. Luckily his new body didn't get stiff or need to build up callous. He'd s
rpassed his old skill within the first couple days. Not that that was saying much. He admitted.

this is what it looks like for me.  

shade and sweet water 
skywise
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wschultz@randolph.spa.edu
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Warped Reality