Well, itsure ain't the average fanfic plot. ;)
Overall, I liked it. Had a whodunit feel to it, complete with the
rather shaky logical jump Ranma make to find the would-be killer. And also
an unusual choice for a villan. Yer gonna probably get a _lot_ of OOC
accusations on this one.
(I think he's more than unbalanced enough to do it, especially after
the wedding scene. *grin*)
The text wrap is a bit off, and some of the dialogue and descs had a
rather stilted feel to them.
Something different. :)
- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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