Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] Honor Lost 2 of 2
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 6/29/1996, 11:59 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Well, itsure ain't the average fanfic plot. ;)
   Overall, I liked it. Had a whodunit feel to it, complete with the
rather shaky logical jump Ranma make to find the would-be killer. And also
an unusual choice for a villan. Yer gonna probably get a _lot_ of OOC
accusations on this one.
   (I think he's more than unbalanced enough to do it, especially after
the wedding scene. *grin*)
   The text wrap is a bit off, and some of the dialogue and descs had a
rather stilted feel to them.
   Something different. :)

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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