On Tue, 18 Jun 1996, Surianti Adrian wrote:

Hm, could you format your fanfic so that it's easier to read ?

Well, let her know what sort of format changes might make it easier to
read! :)  I believe that her line length is about 5 characters or so too
long for a standard pine/pico text reader, so the occasional line wraps
funny on some of the longer lines.  Also some blank lines liberally
sprinkled in might help, say around the numbers(scenes, I think, I'm not
familiar with the play script format) and before and after scene
descriptions and sections of conversation.  As it is, its sort of one
large mass, which makes it harder for the brain to break it up for
digestion. ^ ^ Hope that helps and its not to hard to make those sort of
fixes.

Charles