'Mike W. Loader' spoke:

Liked it. The battle scences were crisp and vivid, and the story was
entertaining.
   Two things:

1: What was a small Merc unit doing with a ultra-rare LAM?

2: How did that Masakari manage to repeatedly fire all 4 PPC's without
overheating to the point of shutdown?

   Liked the weapon designs. :) Our group has fiddled with similar things;
after all, someone has to come up with cool new ideas. ;)

I agree that it was well done, but there was one thing I forgot to C&C about
You had Herb refer to his 'mech as a Mad Dog, the Clan designation is the
Timber Wolf.


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