well i realize that alot of people didnt like my first
part, but i was already half way through the second...so
im posting it anyways,this time around no critism, i got alot
already, i admit im not a great writer, but with time comes
skill. also if you like this serires in the slightst PLEASE
tell me. if im gunna keep up with this series, i want someone
to at least kinda want to read it. thank you.

Well I liked the story, I found it enjoyable.

p.s.
if you have to critisize dont do it about my spellling! i know i suck
at spelling,besides im using note pad to write the whole thing.

I too am not that great at spelling, however there are many spell checkers
available.  I got one from CI$ called spell anywhere (it's shareware) and
I'm know others are available.  Get one, use it.  These things were made for
people like us.
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Ben L. Harrison - HM1(FMF)/USN/RET
Harriso3@ix.netcom.com
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