Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [FF] Heart of the Home |
From: fong_jh@sunset.bph.jhu.edu (Julian Fong) |
Date: 5/20/1996, 2:19 AM |
To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
I was rather surprised by Kasumi's reaction to Akane's impromptu haircut. I think the shock she felt was a little overplayed; you might want to tune it down in future versions.
The flying pan gag was exactly as seen in the anime.-- "I will chide no breather in the world but myself, _____ against whom I know most faults." - As You Like It |_____|_____ Act 3, Scene 2 _____| | Julian Fong: fong_jh@sunset.bph.jhu.edu