Subject: Re: [FFML] [C&C] warped reality
From: "Ranma al'Thor <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Date: 5/14/1996, 4:21 PM
To: Shannon and Tim Richmeyer
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Tue, 14 May 1996, Shannon and Tim Richmeyer wrote:

Skywise (Kelly) wrote:
 
hi this is my first fanfic C+C would definitly be appreciated
so would a good title but untill then I will stick with
 Warped reality

Hi Skywise. O.K. some C&C. Um...the introduction of the 'problem' is a 
little too abrupt, IMHO and Con reacts a little too calmly, don'tcha 
think? And a little too logically? The request to go to the embassy 

I dunno...Some people handle stress and weirdness better than others.  My 
own first impulse would be to think it was all a dream :)

might be better handled as a suggestion from Ami? Maybe a way around 

I dunno..I'd go looking for the embassy if I ended up in Japan or any 
other foreign country by suprise...but then I've been to a lot of foreign 
countries (all in this hemisphere)


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. 
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