On Tue, 14 May 1996, Shannon and Tim Richmeyer wrote:
Skywise (Kelly) wrote:
hi this is my first fanfic C+C would definitly be appreciated
so would a good title but untill then I will stick with
Warped reality
Hi Skywise. O.K. some C&C. Um...the introduction of the 'problem' is a
little too abrupt, IMHO and Con reacts a little too calmly, don'tcha
think? And a little too logically? The request to go to the embassy
I dunno...Some people handle stress and weirdness better than others. My
own first impulse would be to think it was all a dream :)
might be better handled as a suggestion from Ami? Maybe a way around
I dunno..I'd go looking for the embassy if I ended up in Japan or any
other foreign country by suprise...but then I've been to a lot of foreign
countries (all in this hemisphere)
John Walter Biles : MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U.
Kansas
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