At 08:31 PM 4/27/96 -0500, you wrote:

Hmmm.  I like it.  Am I to take it that there might be a few more Serenas 
running around?  The idea has genuine possibilities.  Also, the 
characters were well potrayed...with the emotions between the characters 
done realistically (I could be wrong...I'm not that familiar with the 
Sailor Moon characters).  Keep it up!

My only quibbles are the fact that it's sometimes hard to tell who's saying
what...a new speaker should (IMHO) have their own new indented line...like
in novels, and BGZone and stuff...and the second one is truely a minor
quibble...I *really* don't like the english names...other'n that, is good!

Aaron Stolz-astolz@direct.ca E-mail me anytime! I'm on for HOURS on end all the 
time, so you might even get a reply soon after you send it! *******************