A good alpha, though it was a little confusing due to the transition from 
first to third person.  A recommendation: if you can, keep it all first
person.  It add such a feel...the detachment between story and reader is
narrowed by it.  With the first person, Cassi comes out much more, her
thoughts and feelings much more pronounced than in the third-person format.

Good job, and I'll see you at A-Kon.

Nightelf
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu