Heheh. I'm starting to like this series.....
    A few nitpicks. Dialect made the convesation a little hard to 
understand now and then; keep it, but rework the more incomprehensible 
parts. A few sentences came out kinda flat....
   I loved the boomers thought process scenes. Execellent use of special 
effects there, fit in with the "Show, not Tell" style that English 
teachers babble on about. Plus it was cool.

off in the hardware, but there wasn't.  It was a design flaw left in the
cheaper boomers.  During the first millisecond, the old man twisted out of
the boomers grip.  In the second millisecond the old man stepped to a
flanking position.  In the third millisecond the old man grabbed the
boomers out stretched arm.  If the boomer had been properly programmed it

Okay. I'll bite. What in Bob's name IS he?

What's the song (poetry?) that was included?

Cauterized. Ow. That's harsh. Real harsh.

Write another Ranma fic, by all means. Just don't neglect this series.

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