Subject: Re: [FanFic] The Nameless Saga - Part 6 |
From: XTSEBASTIAN@ccvax.fullerton.edu |
Date: 4/23/1996, 2:14 PM |
To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
The references I was referring to was the entire conversation with the captain and its crew about the sea worthiness of the ship. Whereas in part five it was new and surprising, here it was staid and expected. Perhaps a rework? And could you send parts four through six to this address: <lynncoll@ghost.cc.cmu.edu>? Thanks, Foxtrot the Furryous, BTFH