Subject: Re: [FanFic] The Nameless Saga - Part 4
From: Chan Wei Lik
Date: 4/12/1996, 11:46 PM
To: "'FanFic ML'" <fanfic@andrew.cais.com>

From: 	Ben Kosse[SMTP:bmk7411@cs.rit.edu]
    Actually, I rather liked it. It's similar to Video Girl Ai always
complaining about her breasts shrinking, or the girl in DNA^2 talking about
her dream of a "nice house, a cute pet, a wonderful husband, and the sweet
home of my dreams".<<

For Ai, it was never mentioned after the second chapter. For the other one, it was used sparingly. That was a good move, since it caught the readers' attention without annoying them. Perhaps you should try that Mike.