Subject: Re: [FanFic] The Nameless Saga - Part 4 |
From: Chan Wei Lik |
Date: 4/12/1996, 11:46 PM |
To: "'FanFic ML'" <fanfic@andrew.cais.com> |
From: Ben Kosse[SMTP:bmk7411@cs.rit.edu]
Actually, I rather liked it. It's similar to Video Girl Ai always
complaining about her breasts shrinking, or the girl in DNA^2 talking about her dream of a "nice house, a cute pet, a wonderful husband, and the sweet home of my dreams".<< For Ai, it was never mentioned after the second chapter. For the other one, it was used sparingly. That was a good move, since it caught the readers' attention without annoying them. Perhaps you should try that Mike.