On Fri, 12 Apr 1996, COLIN LOADER wrote:
Nicely written cyberpunkish drama. New proof that an exciting futuristic
fanfic DOESN'T necessarily have to have gunfire on every page.
Thanks! ^_^
The
corporate intrigue angle is a fairly fresh one, at least with the
hero/protagonist as the CEO. Well written, readable writting style.
Hmm.. I think I can do better now that I am (semi)concious ^_-
Dialogue was believable and unstilted, and I particularly liked the end
bit (the conversation in the sedan). I hope to see more,
OK, you will!
soon.
Um.. err.. *sees Foxtrot warming up her cattle prod* Oh boy...
-Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
Me too!
- MW
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