Hmmm...Quite interesting...

I am curious as to how you intend to increase Akane's "Attractiveness Factor".
Akane has always tended to be rather inept at such things.  As for the lemon
bit, if you can do it without, go ahead.  It'll require a little more
creativity, though...

Overall, the story looks good and has a lot of potential.  Whether you lemon
it or not, I look forward to the next installment.

Nightelf
nwl9354@tamvm1.tamu.edu