Subject: Re: A fiction competition -- help?
From: Damon Jason Casale
Date: 3/24/1996, 11:29 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

Excerpts from mail.fanfic: 24-Mar-96 Re: A fiction competition -.. by
Michael White@ccn.cs.dal 
On Sat, 23 Mar 1996, Damon Jason Casale wrote:

I'm part way thrugh, but a few sentences did stand out.

      "I shut it right before supper, Pa.  Why?"
                                        ^^
Pennsylvania? :)

Hickville.  (nah, it's Washingtom)

      The hand scratched at a two day growth, half heartedly swatting at 
*SNIP*
      The hand limped away, grumbling about the rotten weather.  Mark 

Why does this conjur up images of Thing from the Addams Family? :)

That was intentional.  8)

No comments on the story itself yet, probably will have some by Tuesday, 
though.

Ok.

Damon Casale, scyth@andrew.cmu.edu

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