At 12:34 AM 3/14/96 -0500, you wrote:

This is the first part of a new original series I'm
working on.  It's a beta, feel free to post/mail
commentary.

    "Ano... sis... this place is scary," Penny said, clutching at
Brittany's arms.  "Aren't you scared?"

Are you sure you wanted Penny to use "Ano"?   I thought this was
supposed to be taking place in America?

ROTFLOL!  MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA(THUD)*OOOF*
                        (Uh0h)

Sorry, my laugh track got stuck.  Lessee, where was I...

I LIKE!  I kept on waiting for some element from another series to
pop up, and it didn't!  Very original, fun, funny, and weird, with
a touch (just a smidgin, not enough to turn it black) of Heathers.
Not to mention a slightly El-Hazardish feel to it...

Fnord.
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