Subject: Re: [FanFic] Tales of Ranma & Nabiki 8
From: Kevin Eav
Date: 3/7/1996, 12:35 AM
To: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net

On Wed, 6 Mar 1996, Drew Ward wrote:

This concludes Tales of Ranma & Nabiki 8.
Ahhhh!!!

This was GREAT!  Ah!  Romance!  Heartbreak!  Intrigue!  Suspense(as in
who will Ranma end up marrying?)

My main problem with this chapter is that Ranma isn't acting very 
Ranma-ish, in my opinion.  Is it a big problem?  Anybody see any ways to 
correct it other than changing the concept behind the series?

No, I think he's acting perfectly Ranma-ish.  He asks a friend for help
(ukyou), gets gutsy and asks Nabiki to marry him, then he's pissed as
hell when she refuses...and then when he finds out she hates him he
runs out(to ukyou's instead of under his favorite bridge => ) in
a huff.

If anything was strange, I felt as though Ranma didn't give very
much thought to his other possible fiancée, Akane...what, did
he just totally forget about her?  In fact, Akane never once ran
through his mind once...
I don't think he wants to think about anymore fiancees anymore--finding 
out someone you love hates you kinda would turn me off to asking another 
fiancee--even one that admitted that she loved me.

Kevin Eav--First Deacon of the Church of Ryouga, Keeper of the Compass,
                          Member of C.A.S.K.E.T.
email:geist@holly.colostate.edu --  IRC:Ishido at #ranma! -- Ishido@RanmaMUCK
"The world...is a dark and lonely place...beyond hope, beyond care..."-Ryouga
      Okonomiyaki Addicts Anonymous
"C'mon kiddo.  You've got to *find* Akane.  You really are a pain in the 
      fanny sometimes, ya know Ryouga?"-Ukyo