OK, here goes... btw, how long it going to be before i get a reply to my
last responce ?

Chapter 20

[Ucchan's, Late afternoon]


(Ukyou is cleaning up her restaurant; at the counter is Ranma, who's
resting his whole upper body on the counter. Ukyou pokes him to
see if he'll move; when he doesn't, she lifts up an arm, wipes the
spot underneath it, then drops his arm carelessly)

What a slug he is!
 

Ranma: (Holding his arm to his chest) Hey, watch it! That hurt!

Good!
 

Ukyou: (Annoyed) Would you quit with the hell-with-it attitude?
It's really getting to me; I can't take care of this restaurant, go to
school AND look after a blob.

Ranma: Who are you calling a blob?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA....
Blob... BLOB... B L O B!!!!  That is the funnyst thing ive ever read!
 

Voice: I wanna talk to my daughter.

Humm.... intresting!

Ranma: (Taking the phone) Yeah? (His face lights up) Akane!
How's ya doin- I mean, what do you want.

Akane: Don't get so aggressive with me, Ranma.

Ranma, you brute! =]

Ranma: When aren't I?

Good point!

 

Ranma: (Not noticing Ukyou, and throws it to Ukyou) Catch.
(Skips out of Ucchan's whistling)

Ukyou: (Watching Ranma leave) ....

Voice: Ukyou? You still there?

Ukyou: (Shutting her eyes, and slowly curling up) I somehow
wish I wasn't.

Dont worry.. i have a fealing he will be back =]

 

Ranma: *Yeah, I'm the man.*

GOD!! HOW COCKY!!
 

Ranma: (Cheerfully) Hey, haven't seen ya in a while, Kuno. How's ya
been doin' these days?

HAY, ITS KUNO!! HI KUNO!!
 

Kuno: (Holding his bokken at Ranma's nose) You mock me?

Kuno is about to get VERY hurt!!
 

Ranma: (Holding his hands up) Hell, not now Kuno. Don't wanna
waste my time fighting whimps before seein' Akane.

Kuno: (Rushing forward, bokken raised high) You dare call I, the
mighty Kuno a wi-

Ranma: (Kicking Kuno into LEO) Like I said, I don't wanna waste
my time. (After watching Kuno soar above his head with satisfaction,
Ranma jumps on some rooftops to get to the park)

 
YUP, HE GOT HURT!! HAHAHAHAAHAHA....

OK, problem.... I see a wasted opertunity here....  To me, this seems like
the perfect time to have ANOTHER castmember assult Ranma, and just as
Ranmachan ( somehow he becomes Ranmachan when "dealing" with the other
persion ) gets rid ot the person, gusee who gets back from Leo??  heh...
You COULD do something like that here, but it not like a live or die thing, k
 

(Ranma sees P-Ran kissing Akane. To be more specific, Akane and
P-Ran are lying on the ground, Akane on top of P-Ran. Their lips
are barely touching each other's, but it's close enough. Both have
their eyes shut, faces scarlet red)

YEA!!  I so happy!! You go P-Ran!  Thanks Isabel, you RULE!!  HAHAHAHA...
Take a hike Ranma!

  

Akane: (Blushing even harder) Ranma, it's not-

Yes it is =]
 

Ranma: Just don't rub it in by invitin' me to the wedding. 'k?
(Turns around, and trudges away)

I'm shoure they will invite you Ranma, dont worry about it.
 

Akane: Ranma, matte*!

matte?
 

Ranma: *Abayo** Akane.*

huh?
 

[The scene fades]

 
AARRGG.. CURSE THOSE EVIL OCTOPI for ending HERE?11  you and your EVIL CLIFF
HANGERS!!  I LOVED this chapter, your still my #1 Fanfic!!
 

matte= (I think) Is wait. If it's wrong, or I'm not using it
corectly, please tell me. I doin't like looking like an idiot
anymore than anyone out there.

Oh!

abayo= I haven't found this in any japanese-english dictionary,
but to me this is obviously a very 'final' way of saying goodbye.
Once again, if it's wrong beat me over the head and make me corect
this.

Well, intersting.. go home to Ukyou, she loves you!

	Oh, and if you know how I feel about the relationship
between Ranma and Akane, this isn't really a cliffhanger.

Grr.. you MOCK me!?  You better not do what i think your doing... grr..
CURSE YOU ISABEL!! 

	Isabel Arantes

Love you Isabel, btw, VERY MARRY CHRISTMAS!!!!
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Brian Geringer
http://www.igc.net/~ranma204
Come to the #ranma! IRC channel
"Curse those evil Octopi"
"Kill her!"
"I went to the Tendo Dojo and all I was this stupid Sig."
"To infinity, and beyond!"
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