Hello again!

That a hint?  :)

A hint?  To the guy who repeatedly tells us all the character's hair color,
eye color, and hardsuit color; repeatedly tells us the hero likes to
power-load his tea with lots of cream and sugar and is crazy about his
girlfriend; etc etc etc....  and repeatedly means at least one instance of
the above on every page.

What do you think? :)

Well, I thought that it was better to insert short descriptive terms rather
than put their names in almost every sentence.

Part of the references to what has gone before is, I admit, also partly in
case someone might have forgotten what has happened previously.  (After
all...how many pages has it been so far?  ;)  )
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Bert Van Vliet
[alias SkyKnight, Knight-in-Shining-Armour and generally annoying good guy]
 Die-hard Bubblegum Crisis Fan and writer of really large Fanfics!
 "Trust me.  I know what I'm doing!"