Subject: Re: Ok, this one is Chapter Four.
From: Harvey Torrance Griffin
Date: 8/31/1995, 11:01 AM

On Thu, 31 Aug 1995, White Wolf wrote:
I don't understand why you have Ranma^H^Hko cry at the end.  While I can 
certainly agree with fainting, there doesn't seem to be any reason for 
him^H^Her to cry...

	I got the impression that his/her helf control finally broke 
under the strain of that afternoon.

To Hitomi: It appears that you are shaping this up to be a genuine
tear-jerker, I for one am impressed <snif>.  I'll try to get a more
thourough review together if I have time (still working on my own story
and trying to get ready for beginning of semester).